Although I did find one section I'd forgotten about. Apparently I wrote in a very vague dream sequence when Ellis first falls asleep on the plane as he leaves the USA.
A DREAM SEQUENCE!?!? SERIOUSLY?!
I didn't even specify what it was, just that it would happen.
Sad thing is, I can't think of any other way around it at the moment!
Maybe I can make it something like these ones... then at least it'll feel vaguely justified.
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